What follows is taken from Structuring Your Novel: From Basic Idea To Finished Manuscript by Robert C. Meredith and John D. Fitzgerald:
Fred James was tired as he and Jim Harding found the trail leading to the old mine. He knew they couldn't reach the mine before nightfall. He watched Jim stare at the weeds and bushes that had grown over the trail. He asked Jim if he would mind camping where they were overnight.
The last sentence was purposely written to illustrate this POVs major disadvantage, which is that the narrator must refer to the protagonist as He. In the same paragraph, the protagonist refers to the narrator as he which in the hands of an inexperienced writer can lead to confusion on the reader's part--this could be disastrous...
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